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Friday, 30 September 2011
From the gym
As the title suggests, this Haiku is inspired by my trip to the gym. Just a bit of fun, but as always would appreciate any constructive criticism!
Ode to gym bunnies;
Bodies built like warrior queens -
Intimidating!
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MikeRags
3 October 2011 at 15:17
Like it! Scans well too.
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3 October 2011 at 16:20
Thank you!
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Like it! Scans well too.
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